Is this a good poem? plz help and give me ideas of that to add?

-Your smile is like a shining start so bright and strong,

Your laugh is quite gentle like a babies cry, your grip

So firm and soft like the touch of a angle, your words are

Mellow and speak to my heart, no matter how far apart

You still hold a spot in my heart, when it rains I think of you

Memories that make me cry thoughts of love that make me die

The glitter in your eyes the feeling of your breath I cannot forget

Pictures on the wall notes that I have saves are all but just memories of

A broken dream that no longer exists. The past don鈥檛 last and the future

Is to short so therefore I try to block the thoughts of you out of my mind

Stuck deep inside a cove my love is trapped in side a cell and the key is lost

No matter the pain no matter the strain I cant help but think of you

Looking down from way above I see you with another man, my heart

Explodes with thoughts of rage, I try to stop but im to far caught in the grasp of love